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[ellarien]

One and a half videophone conversations, mostly.

In other writing-related news, I've been rereading some of my old stuff again, and wondering what led me to certain choices in the rewriting phase. There's a minor character from The Admiral's Lady who didn't make it into the final version; I can more or less see why (I was trying to be ruthless about dropping unnecessary stuff, and her main scene just slowed the story down even though it was the only scene containing the title phrase), but the trouble is that she still exists in my head -- and turns up in some of the sequel stories too.

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[ellarien]

That process sounds somewhat familiar -- it's more or less how the novel-thing gained several thousand words in the first round of 'cutting.'

The A.L is not really up for another rewrite, but the sequel may be, one of these days, and the bit where the minor character jokes with the heroine about something that (as of the third draft or so) didn't actually happen will probably have to go, alas.