That process sounds somewhat familiar -- it's more or less how the novel-thing gained several thousand words in the first round of 'cutting.'
The A.L is not really up for another rewrite, but the sequel may be, one of these days, and the bit where the minor character jokes with the heroine about something that (as of the third draft or so) didn't actually happen will probably have to go, alas.
Mission Statement
Reading, writing, plant photography, and the small details of my life, with digressions into science and computing.
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Date: 2007-01-12 02:08 am (UTC)The A.L is not really up for another rewrite, but the sequel may be, one of these days, and the bit where the minor character jokes with the heroine about something that (as of the third draft or so) didn't actually happen will probably have to go, alas.