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ellarienExtended one scene, put in another, and started a third. Undone now stands at just over 5k altogether, probably about halfway.
I worry a bit that I'm getting my angst far too cheaply on this one; it's hard to strike a balance between letting the characters react genuinely to what they think is going on, and slipping in enough clues to let the audience know that actually, something quite different is happening.
I worry a bit that I'm getting my angst far too cheaply on this one; it's hard to strike a balance between letting the characters react genuinely to what they think is going on, and slipping in enough clues to let the audience know that actually, something quite different is happening.
