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Date: 2007-01-11 07:46 am (UTC)
Sounds as if your best choice is to have her in a marginal role, but not give her centre stage. Alternatively, if her scene was important for other reasons, you might look at other places where your scenes establish something fairly minor - 'time passes and the characters get to know each other' is always a good place to start - and see whether you can replace them with other scenes - often wildly different scenes, involving different events and different characters which, ultimately, establish the same, so she gets _more_ of an arc, however minor it might be.
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